Daily POST, Daily Prompt, Feelings, Life, Poetry

tHe ComFORT of MoThEr👩‍👧-CaptiVATING

Oh, dear mother…

Those were the days of captivation I remember,

I  miss and I wish to be there,

Those were the days I cherish forever,

I was just a free bird in your care,

Those were the days of my pleasure,

I  always recall as my treasure,

Those were the days of no measures,

I just had enough full days of leisure,

Oh, dear mother …

Most captivating is, being with you, in your care,

I am a mother of two beautiful girls now,

And I am captivated by all their affair,

Still, at times I crave for the same fascination I had in your sphere!

Oh Dear Mother I really Miss You Everywhere!💖

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Daily POST, Daily Prompt, Feelings, Journey, Life, Poetry

Meander-Just be vital and find the path

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Kids saw me in the meander,
in the search for some splendor,
I said I surrender help me out of this meander please,
Kids laugh, with Bright eyes they said look around,
you are at the exit of your own meander, your maze,
the path ahead is straight with no turn, no twist
But…
remember you just need to be in your vital formation,
no tangles, no angles
just you, with no seasoning and no reasoning
the kids disappeared,
and I found a new way,
out of the maze,
with no angles, no tangles,
no vogue or no craze
neither seasoning nor reasoning

Sometimes we just get stuck in our meander, thinking no way out of our sorrow, stress, and grief. The moment we surrender to HIM and we become just witness to our surounding, all the tangles are gone!

Daily POST, Daily Prompt, Feelings, Poetry

LiFe is WoNdEr, NaTuRe is Wonderful

Lifes Wonder

wonder to me

how two people think alike sitting on the different shore of life,

wonder to me

how different size and shaped people all look beautiful when they wear a smile

wonder to me

how we are destroying our nature who has given us everything for our life

wonder to me

how we all start our journey as an innocent child and then end up as immoral being

wonder to me

how a woman considered the power and treated as tender and fragile

wonder to me

how a single ray of sunshine takes all the darkness and twilight

wonder to me

how come we all need peace in the first place and only some of us try

wonder to me

how we spend money and time on to cherish man-made wonders but we ignore the humankind

The most beautiful wonder is LIFE, live it to its fullest!

 

 

Wishing a wonderful Life to everyone😊

 

 

 

Journey, Life, Poetry, Prayer

eNCRUST

Come along, leave the shell
Enjoy the old rusted ringing bell,
Open your heart and feel the breeze

Come along, take a deep breath
Leave behind all the miseries,
Dare to face your fear
The world will look more clear

Come along, let’s rake
Don’t encrust behind the fake
The era has come to life’s remake

Come along leave the shell, Come along, take a deep breath, Come along, let’s rake!

**This was in response to Daily word prompt Encrust, which somehow I could not publish at that time.
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An hour ago-Factful Feedback, Handle with Care!

Just an hour ago!

With pretty much confidence in myself, my blog design and my writing, I asked my cousin if she can give me some feedback on my blog, just an hour ago. There was some temptation floating inside, that maybe she will come up with some marvelous reactions and words in reference to my blog and posts.

About her: She is a very good quality assurance professional and working as a freelancer. Also a mother of a 3-year-old girl. I appreciate her for what she is doing, working as a mother and as a professional. It needs so much time and effort and courage to manage both, I too had done it at some point in time. She is one of the inspirations behind this blog, she encouraged me for this. She is younger than me.

Feedback: The feedback she gave me came as opposed to what my ears were ready to hear, she gave me facts and opened my eyes. The feedback from her says that I have grammar mistakes, and lack of flow in my writing. According to her, I write better in Hindi, and I need to read and write a lot. Ooofffff all the heartbreaking truth, the FACT she said. At times how difficult it becomes to take a negative feedback and accept it. But I have taken these as very good pointers, my work areas.

FACTFact is, I am constantly thinking how to improve my writing. Fact is, I am not going to drop my English writing, I am enjoying it. Fact is for sure I will continue Hindi writing. Another fact (I discovered this one) that  I was under this impression that I have a unique name, what an eye opener, a factful day for me.

I thank you so much dear for all your valuable time and feedback,  I know it takes time and effort to give a genuine feedback. Thank you, and love you!

Thanks to all my dear readers and Good Day🌸